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Thursday 12 March 2020

my poem about things that make me


Wednesday 11th march 2020.
Things that make me tired.

1.When I get back from rugby.
2.Staying up too late.
3.When I'm on the game
4.When I'm watching TV.
5.When I am lying by my dogs.
6.Doing work at home.

7.When I get back from taumarere, long walks.

5 comments:

  1. Hey Nikau! It's Mia and I just want to say, these are pretty cool ways on what makes you tired even though these are pretty common things tha tmake you tired. To complete this blog post just add a learning story + a background. Anyways, if you would like to check out my blog then copy and paste this link address into google THEN BOOM!. Ciao :)
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  2. hi Nikau it's Loukwon-Dre you have some amazing ways that make you tired and there pretty commen for people to have but its cool to see your ways that make you tiredlike walkin all the way from taumarere and lying with your dogs so cute

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  3. kia ora my name is jakaya i like the way you have some cool way of how tired.

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  4. Hi Nikau, great work with your list poem, staying up late and doing my work at home also make me very tired. Next time, you do not need to number your sentences. I'd love to see it published with images that relate to your poem.

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  5. Hi Nikau great work with your list poem i really like it maybe next time you can add a background to your work that would make it much better next time maybe you can check out my blog
    http://kpshirinih.blogspot.com/

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